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There you were
You stood there
I felt another.

Ghastly wind stalked around
Unholy footsteps prodded the ground
Yet unmoved was the cradle.

Shivered bodies did not shake
The bow did not break
As predetermined in a season.

Summer nights came and went with the morning dew
Are forgotten days still a few?
The artist has long conceived and drew
Motivation from the times in which I held you.

Not only I, but you held me fast
In my time of torment ever last.

There you were
You stood there
And I shuddered with downcast eyes

Having nothing to say
Indeed, opposing forces came against us that day

As our eyes were opened up to see
The blind fool called destiny.

There you were
There we were
Undoubtedly, it was that final kiss
That ensued unbearable dismiss
Of the scorching fire between us.

To believe in loving and losing
May be to one starkly amusing

While to another
It may be fond memories of each other
Time they once shared there.

We both stood there, amazed.
And have returned from that place, unscathed.

Indeed forever,
The stars of the sky shall brightly burn.
So does the heart yearn.
©2005-2009 ~Shikoshen
:iconshikoshen:

Author's Comments

Wow, I'm actually writing something? A poetic side? I didn't even know that i had one of those... Anyway, while in the midst of all this Valentine's day spirit, I came up with a poem all of a sudden. Its a really random piece of work, but directed to a much higher source. Hope somebody will like it!

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:iconangel-t:
good poem. it was a nice read. :D

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Angel T

I always see what you're doing so, be careful next time.
:pray:

hey check out my gallery
[link]
:iconshikoshen:
Hey thanks! Glad somebody actually took the time out to not only read it, but :O appreciate it! :highfive:

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:highfive:

"I draw, therefore I am" - Anonymous
:iconangel-t:
u'r welcome

--
Angel T

I always see what you're doing so, be careful next time.
:pray:

hey check out my gallery
[link]
:icon3ccentr1cone:
Bren

OMG! I absolutely love it! U did a great job..and left ME in awwww...

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Leave 'em in AWWWW

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98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconshikoshen:
Heh...thanks loads....it was really a spur of the moment kinda thing....

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:highfive:

"I draw, therefore I am" - Anonymous
:icondarknatured:
very nice poem *nod, nod*

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Forgive me not the torment of my mind but remember what it is you have forgiven me for...
~VD

"(To) Decrease the Population" *holds up scythe*
:iconshikoshen:
Heh thanks for reading it! Much Obliged considering its my first time tryin my hand at this sorta thing...:D

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:highfive:

"I draw, therefore I am" - Anonymous
:iconnomusicallowed:
wow.... I get the impression from the description that you don't write much? THAT'S A LIE!! You can't not write and have this much ease with words.... and if so, DO IT MORE OFTEN!!

I really, really like this. :salute:

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He didn't sacrifice himself so that I could be silent about all He's done for me... and could do for you.
:iconshikoshen:
HEH HEH WOW...
Brought the biggest smile to my face........lol.
Thanks a lot.....This really was my first try at it, tho i've always thought poetry was kinda.....well...drab.
But i have a whole new appreciation for it, now, since coming to DA.

Mmmm......
Not sure about doing more of this....
ah, i never know!D

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:highfive:

"I draw, therefore I am" - Anonymous

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